手把手教你雅思写作Task2五段公式法 写作再也不发愁

　　如果你想在雅思写作考试中取得满意的成绩，那么提前做好准备，带上自己的写作技巧进考场就是个好主意。本文我们来研究一下考生最常遇到的问题，之后用简单的公式来攻克这些问题。你也可以点击这里，了解之前博客中提到的同意/不同意公式。
 

　　作为一名雅思备考老师，我认为在雅思写作考试中表现出色的考生都有这些特点：

　　了解题目的不同类型：雅思考试最常出现的4种题目：

　　1. 同意/不同意

　　2. 讨论某种现象

　　3. 问题/解决方式

　　4. 优势/劣势
 

　　制定计划：除了要了解不同的文章写作方法之外，你需要在头脑中规划清楚各种文体的文章该如何书写。
 

　　下面我们来看着四种文章的可能出现的表现形式：
 

　　1. Some people believe the internet is the most important invention in modern history.

　　你在多大程度上同意/不同意?
 

　　2. Some people believe that testing products on animals should be banned but others think that this is necessary.

　　讨论两种各种观点，并给出自己观点。
 

　　3. More and more professionals, such as engineers and doctors, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries.

　　这会导致什么问题?

　　你提出的解决办法是什么?
 

　　4. These days more and more people are choosing to improve their appearance with cosmetic surgery.

　　这种趋势的缺点是否大于优点?
 

　　需要注意的是，大多数写作考题都会直接提出问题，类似上面例题3中的问法。你应该确保在主体段落中具体回答每一个问题，以及你自己认同的观点。同时不要忘记文章的首尾段。
 

　　小提示：我们将重点放在讨论文章上，所以你必须在文中说清楚两种对立的观点。也就是说，即使你非常不同意某种观点，你也需要将它写出来并陈述自己的观点。
 

　　样题、答案，与公式

　　下面为大家带来一个雅思写作样题和答案。答案中的每句话都一个重要的目的，在看最后的写作公式之前，请先看看自己能否理解每行和每段都起什么作用。
 

　　样题：

　　Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city streets is to lower the speed limit, but others think there are better ways to improve the safety on city streets.

　　Discuss both views and give your opinion.
 

　　答案：

　　The number of serious accidents is growing because more and more people are driving cars on city streets. Some think the solution lies in lowering speed limits, but others think that improving public transportation will have a more powerful effect as it will take cars off the road completely. I believe both solutions are valid. This essay will consider the different viewpoints before deciding what is the best solution.

　　There are some that see speeding as the main reason why people are involved in motor vehicle accidents and think that driving slower can solve the problem. Indeed, if people drove slower throughout the city, the risk and frequency of accidents would decrease because the faster a car travels, the more damage it can do to whatever it hits. Many cities around the world, like Paris, France, have significantly lowered their speed limits over the last decade and it seems that fewer serious incidents have been reported.

　　However, some think that streets would be safer with fewer cars on the road and so the solution lies in improving public transportation. Faster and more efficient subway and bus systems along with reliable high-speed train service in and out of a city will make it easier for commuters to choose an alternative to driving. Cities, like Seoul Korea, that have focused on building public transport that is reliable, fast and safe are examples of how this approach can reduce the number of traffic accidents while keeping people moving.

　　My opinion is a balance of the two. Cities that have been developed with great public transport systems have fewer car problems on the road and if they also have lower speed limits, they are an ideal place to visit or work in. Brussels, Belgium is an example of this as it has fast and reliable tram, bus and metro systems and it also ensures that drivers maintain slower speeds by installing speed bumps, traffic circles and frequent speed monitoring devices so there are far fewer reports of serious accidents.

　　City streets need to be safer for everyone and speeding is definitely a problem but with improved public transit, there will be fewer cars to worry about. If cities make drivers slow down and also maintain an efficient rail and bus system, the issue of safe roads will be reduced, and we can all feel safe getting around.
 

　　下面是这篇文章的写作大纲：
 

　　讨论型文章五段公式：
 

　　第一段：导论
 

　　第一句：介绍主题

　　The number of serious accidents is growing because more and more people are driving cars on city streets.

　　第二句：提出两种观点

　　Some think the solution lies in lowering speed limits, but others think that improving public transportation will have a more powerful effect as it will take cars off the road completely.

　　第三句：提出作者观点

　　I believe both solutions are valid.

　　第四句：简要介绍下文将做哪些陈述

　　This essay will consider the different viewpoints before deciding what is the best solution.
 

　　第二段：中间段
 

　　第一句：提出论点一

　　There are some that see speeding as the main reason why people are involved in motor vehicle accidents and think that driving slower can solve the problem.

　　第二句：讨论为何人们会持有这种观点

　　Indeed, if people drove slower throughout the city, the risk and frequency of accidents would decrease because the faster a car travels, the more damage it can do to whatever it hits.

　　第三句：给出论据

　　Many cities around the world, like Paris, France, have significantly lowered their speed limits over the last decade and it seems that fewer serious incidents have been reported.
 

　　第三段：中间段
 

　　第一句：提出论点二

　　However, some think that streets would be safer with fewer cars on the road and so the solution lies in improving public transportation.

　　第二句：讨论为何人们会持有这种观点

　　Faster and more efficient subway and bus systems along with reliable high-speed train service in and out of a city will make it easier for commuters to choose an alternative to driving.

　　第三句：给出论据

　　Cities, like Seoul Korea, that have focused on building public transport that is reliable, fast and safe are examples of how this approach can reduce the number of accidents while keeping people moving.
 

　　第四段：中间段
 

　　第一句：提出自己的论点

　　My opinion is a balance of the two.

　　第二句：讨论为何你会持有这种观点

　　Cities that have been developed with great public transport systems have fewer car problems on the road and if they also have lower speed limits, they are an ideal place to visit or work in.

　　第三句：给出论据

　　Brussels, Belgium is an example of this as it has fast and reliable tram, bus and metro systems and it also ensures that drivers maintain slower speeds by installing speed bumps, traffic circles and frequent speed monitoring devices so there are far fewer reports of serious accidents.
 

　　第五段：结论段
 

　　第一句：总结文中提出的不同论点

　　City streets need to be safer for everyone and speeding is definitely a problem but with improved public transit there will be less cars to worry about.

　　第二句：论述自己认为更好或更重要的论点

　　If cities make drivers slow down and also maintain an efficient rail and bus system, the issue of safe roads will be reduced and we can all feel safe getting around.
 

　　在这个例子中，作者的观点是两种观点的组合。也可以只同意其一，或是两者都不赞同。