雅思A类写作考试不能出现的单词短语及句式汇总

　　雅思写作考试是雅思考试中最具挑战性的单项考试之一，很多考生都在写作考试中拿不到高分。一个扣分的方面，可能是你没有区分清楚基础和非正式语言。下面是一些在雅思写作Task1和Task2中不能出现的语言表达形式。

　　词汇

　　尽量避免使用基本词汇，多向考官展示你的词汇量。多使用复杂和精准的词汇，这样就可以提高写作考试分数。

　　形容词

　　用以下推荐的形容词可以拿更高分数：

常用词汇	推荐词汇
A big number of people travel for leisure.	A large number of people travel for leisure.
Enforcing stronger penalties is an easy solution.	Enforcing stronger penalties is an obvious solution.
Modelling this behaviour can have a bad effect on children.	Modelling this behaviour can have a negative effect on children.

　　名词

　　部分名词的含义非常笼统，例如“things”和“stuff”等。而就某个主题写文章的时候，尽量使用精确和正式的词汇，避免使用含义笼统的词汇。

常用词汇	推荐词汇
People tend to collect many things over time.	People tend to collect many items over time.
Often, stuff from our past can hurt us today.	Often, experiences from our past can hurt us today.
Cops need to be strict yet sympathetic when dealing with the public.	Police officers need to be strict yet sympathetic when dealing with the public.

　　动词

　　也有一些动词有各种各样的含义和用法，例如“have”、“give”、“get”等。建议考生使用与主题相关的动词来使句子表达更加准确。

常用词汇	推荐词汇
This manual gives detailed information about the machinery used.	This manual provides detailed information about the machinery used.
Getting the correct information can be difficult.	Obtaining the correct information can be difficult.
When someone has the right tools, their future is bright.	When someone possesses the right tools, their future is bright.

　　副词

　　很多人会使用“very”或“so”来强调观点，希望你能注意一下，也许有更准确的词汇来表达同样的含义。

常用词汇	推荐词汇
Understanding the issue is very important.	Understanding the issue is crucial.
Forming a strong opinion can be so difficult for some.	Forming a strong opinion can be extremely difficult for some.

　　口语化语言

　　一些单词和短语用在口语中很自然，但用在写作中就不太正式了。写作Task2需要正式用语，所以考生要尽量避免各种形式的口语化语言。

　　缩略语

　　为了让你的写作词汇量达标，让句子看上去更加正式，一定要使用词汇的完整形式：

常用词汇	推荐词汇
This requirement must be completed a.s.a.p.	This requirement must be completed as soon as possible.
Many factors contribute to the issue (ex. air pollution).	Many factors, such as air pollution, contribute to the issue.
Words can’t express the deep emotions that individuals feel.	Words cannot express the deep emotions individuals feel.
Technology doesn’t have a place in our school system.	Technology does not have a place in our school system.

　　量词

　　尽管雅思口语考试中经常会用到“a lot of”和“lots of”等量词，但在雅思A类写作考试中使用这类词汇就非常不合适。

常用词汇	推荐词汇
Lots of people use public transportation.	Several people use public transportation.
With social media being so popular, only a few people actually meet in person.	With social media being so popular, only a slight number of people meet in person.

　　动词短语

　　下表中的常用词汇没有问题，而且我们在口语中经常会用到这些动词短语;但是仍然有更加书面和正式的表达方式：

常用词汇	推荐词汇
Running out of options can be a negative consequence.	Exhausting all options can be a negative consequence.
Organizations can call off any promotion at any time.	Organizations can cancel any promotion at any time.
When an idea blows up on the internet, it goes viral.	When an idea explodes on the internet, it goes viral.

　　句子结构

　　简单的语法结构、基本词汇和非正式词汇都是让写作分数偏低的原因。

　　在雅思写作考试中，不要使用类似“we can clearly see”或者“it is obvious that”的句式。同时要准确自然的使用连接词和连接短语。最好能尝试用不同方式来写同一句话，找到最准确自然的表达方式。

常用词汇	推荐词汇
It is obvious that the number of students increased over the two-year period.	The number of students increased over the two-year period.
At the end of the day, it doesn’t matter what you do, it’s how you do it.	In conclusion, it doesn’t matter what you do, it’s how you do it.
There are many issues within the education system.	Many issues are occurring within the education system.

　　在雅思写作考试Task1和Task2中，确保语言简洁、准确，并且要完整充分的回答题目要素。如果你能做到这几点，写作分数一定会提高。